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Originally Posted by NikkiPilkington
And yes, the text looks a bit crammed in.
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That would be my main comment too. People need to be hit with what your site is about as soon as they land on the site, e.g. a banner with a computer on it that says something like "I can fix your PC".
When the text is crammed in like on yours, I don't want to read it. Then all those keywords you have crammed in make it look spammy, as Nikki says.
The design is ok, but very minimal. I would maybe look at getting a free template. There are thousands. Try:
Open Design Community - Download Free Web Design Templates - OpenDesigns.org
Free Fluid WordPress Themes and CSS Templates
or Google